Zalfurius's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[U no wich colour]

ahh the good ol' tomato fight ;) haha awesome

[Island of Giant Pokemon]

i remember that episode!! and the pokemon had subtitles so you could actually read what they were saying for once. awesome art , so warm :)

[Justice League Selfie]

For a mouse drawing this is quite decent, next time if you put more focus into the eyes and really observed how eyes are structured it will bring out their expressions more. If you have the money a drawing tablet is seriously useful. The proportions of each character are mostly pretty good, nice work dude, keep it up :)

mrasian444 responds:

Thanks. I'll take your advice into consideration. I figured that digital would be better than using sharpies and markers. For the proportions, I did notice the problem with Aquaman, but by then, it was a little late. I'm going to try to save money for a tablet. I do believe that that will help a lot. Thanks, again!

[The Tick]

Your linework and crosshatch shading is pretty good, for now I think you should work on the colouring. The way the colours are blurred and airbrushed falls a bit flat on him. Good work on the hand though, they can be a real pain to get the structure right

[Spectrum Man #1: Page 3]

Hey man. Pretty cool comic, and I have a suggestion. The 3rd and 4th panels both have speech bubbles under them at the same height, but the one under the 4th is from panel 6, so it's easy to read the dialogue in the wrong order (at least I did haha) It's not a big deal but if you think more about the placement of speech in the future it could make this comic a smoother read. Peace

EvilRay responds:

Hmm, good idea, it shouldn't be so hard. I'll see what I can do about it. Thanks!

[PK Love Omega 20]

i can't say enough times how much i love this comic of yours

Janice-Stein responds:

Thank you :D

[The Great Serpent Titan]

pretty awesome, i think that guy's about to be that snake's next meal

[CLIMB]

very stylish!! love the post-apocalyptic feel. her eyes are kinda strange but it's still awesome :)

[Jedi Training, Sewer Style]

Your style is absolutely flawless

geogant responds:

Thanks!!!!

[PK Love Omega 12]

i am in love with the energy of your characters. get him red!!!!