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this looks totally spot on man. keep it up!!

AleunaM responds:

Thank you! Still have a long way to go... I'm not easily satisfied, haha!

this is really amazing man

rainwalker007 responds:

Thank you :)

i love it!! and everyone looks more intense than in the original image too. you totally nailed the poses. the only nitpicky thing i can find is that lucario's snout look a little off from this angle. but this is still an awesome drawing all the same!! PS: i've been doing something similar with pokemon and attack on titan ;) great minds think alike!!

zerochan923600 responds:

Hee hee, thanks! I guess I didn't give her snout enough attention, it is a bit 2D, what with the lack of nose and the weird stripe down the middle. Oh well, I appreciate the comment, good luck with your poke titans!

Awesomely vibrant and you executed the lineart to perfection, plus your characters look original, really hard to fault this!! Maybe you could add some highlights? anyway, nice work :)

zerochan923600 responds:

Thanks mate! I swear I hadn't watched card capture back when I invented these guys, and I was crushed when I found out that show not only had a flying orange cat, but a flying black one too! XD I guess it's not the concept, but the execution that counts. Haha, thanks again! I'm glad you pointed out the lineart, I'm personally pretty proud of it too.

Awesome man, you totally captured the spirit of the game in this!!

min3ralWater responds:

Thanks! That means a lot since it's probably the most important thing with fan art. Thanks for the review!

nice solid colours, is that copic? as for the linework, i like your style, but the lines have only two thicknesses (thick around the outline and thin inside the image). while this is aesthetically pleasing, you could raise it higher and experiment and taper thick lines on the inside more, wherever you feel needs it (such as where the chin ends under the fangs if that makes sense)

you're on the right track, i think we both approach art in a similar way, keep it up dude!!

BTWComics responds:

Hey thanks, yes it is copic, I'm trying to get a larger variety of markers but i felt that with this piece I was more confidence with what I had. Thanks for the advice, I have a large range of liners and will try and use them to the best effect next time!

awesome work dude. the art portal needs more copic art

danomano65 responds:

Check out my gallery! I have 4 Star Wars copic covers from last month!

For a mouse drawing this is quite decent, next time if you put more focus into the eyes and really observed how eyes are structured it will bring out their expressions more. If you have the money a drawing tablet is seriously useful. The proportions of each character are mostly pretty good, nice work dude, keep it up :)

mrasian444 responds:

Thanks. I'll take your advice into consideration. I figured that digital would be better than using sharpies and markers. For the proportions, I did notice the problem with Aquaman, but by then, it was a little late. I'm going to try to save money for a tablet. I do believe that that will help a lot. Thanks, again!

i can't say enough times how much i love this comic of yours

Janice-Stein responds:

Thank you :D

bird person can arrange this

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