Zalfurius's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Terra Majoris]

Some nice work here, I like the atmospheric glow you put around the planet. The yellow ring of clouds looks just a tiny bit out of sync with the equator, if you raise it a little it might look more equatorial. Now for the stars, it's a pretty good arrangement overall. I reckon they should be more uniform in colour - you've got a few purple and red ones that seem a little out of place. But the stark whiteness of the rest of them is a bit piercing and distracting from the planet. You could try making them a little dimmer. Maybe zoom in and add a bunch of tiny groups of stars like mini galaxies.
Anyway good work! I'll go check out your other arts!

walkinator responds:

yeah, you're right about the stars, I'll fix this later maybe. If I ever get the time.

[Cosmic Birth]

That is a seriously awesome cosmic piece dude, love the cloud detail!

[Spyro the Dragon]

yes

Spyro is a beast and so is your art!!!

[charmander vector art]

Nice

Dang. Those are some smooth lines, friend. Teach me your ways!!

megadrivesonic responds:

when you are armed with flash and gimp anything is possible

[Excuses, Excuses]

GOOD

The clothes and weaponry go well together but I think you could work on defining the shape of the body a bit more, maybe try to move away from the straight outlines. Keep drawing!!

[ripto´s arena]

SPYRO!!

I love spyro! This is great! One of my favourite boss battles!

[Woah!]

Hooray!!

keep trying man, that's the best way to learn!! when i first started drawing i was really terrible, now since i drew more i am just terrible

[Isaac's Sword]

Fancy

It's good for concept art, but I suggest you move onto a different program for drawing on the computer, Paint isn't really the best for drawing stuff. I was gonna suggest adding something to the end of the hilt but then I saw that you're gonna add a skull, which would probably suit it nicely. Will it go with the colour scheme and be red/black or will it just be a plain ol' white skull?
I'm planning a series too! Dunno what it'll be called, probably "Rovion" or something silly like that.

DragonOverlord2012 responds:

I'll probably get Photoshop or something, but for now all I have is paint, and the skull will likely be a dark red. Good luck with your series!

[madness day 09]

Err

I'm sorry, but... This looks like it took only 3 seconds to draw, a nine-year-old could do better. Try adding more details to the hands and gun, and make the overall image smoother.